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Post by weredog on Jul 19, 2007 15:20:39 GMT -5
Once upon a time there was a boy called Timmy Timmons. He was always happy, playing out in the forest by himself. Only the squirels to keep him company.
But one day. Something unexpected happened. He turned into a wolf... THE END
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Post by Werewolf on Jul 20, 2007 2:09:41 GMT -5
Wow! It's way better than the script for DarkWolf!
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Post by ArcLight on Jul 20, 2007 10:13:50 GMT -5
"THE END"??
Sounds more like a beginning to me.
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Post by weredog on Jul 20, 2007 19:07:05 GMT -5
Thanks for such praise  |
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Post by dedwyre on Jul 20, 2007 21:08:30 GMT -5
You're lucky. I can't write stories when I'm bored.
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Post by Werewolf on Jul 23, 2007 2:20:05 GMT -5
You're lucky. I can't write stories when I'm bored. Can you write them when your not bored? |
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Post by Marcus on Jul 23, 2007 6:17:10 GMT -5
lol. I've been saving this thread for when I'd got some time so I could read the story,  wish I could write them as good as that. I've not enough patience as I want to write it all at once rather the do a bit at a time and have the story build. That and I'm rubbish at dialog. Actually what I really wish was that I coudl draw, and then I'd do a graphic novel. But I do like your story. Very clean and with a shocking surprise ending too!! brilliant! |
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Post by dedwyre on Jul 23, 2007 11:48:20 GMT -5
You're lucky. I can't write stories when I'm bored. Can you write them when your not bored? I can. Doesn't mean I usually do  I usually need a deadline to force me to write. |
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